Semi-Realistic Color for Adoption

Hi~ I really like the colors you used in this <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
Vision: I don't know if you had a specific theme or anything in mind xD
Originality: Just a profile shot? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I like how you went with semi-realism.
Technique: I really love how you colored the lips, and the delicate eyelashes and hair. The lips might be a little low though- lengthen the chin by a bit?
The shoulder is a bit too forward- move it back (which would be to the right) a little more. As well as at the base of the neck where it meets the chest, a slight bump to show the collarbone coming through.
Impact: The thing that really caught my eye was the colors and the delicate feeling of the picture <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Good job~ and keep it up!